by Twisted Heart Oct 31, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
The little bird upon the branch |
by *Charisma*
I liked the poem. It had great imagery. The only thing I wasn't crazy about was that your rhyme scheme changed by like the 3rd to last stanza. It just threw me off. Jpoet* |
by Elynnka
Lovely poem! Good work! 5/5 |