Comments : Hummingbird's First Flight

  • 18 years ago

    by Elynnka

    Lovely poem! Good work! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I liked the poem. It had great imagery. The only thing I wasn't crazy about was that your rhyme scheme changed by like the 3rd to last stanza. It just threw me off. Jpoet*