The Love of Fate

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Oct 31, 2006


Protest against a simple love,
Sweet and cherished from above,
Dolled eyes through love of great,
Finding that you mustn't wait.
From above does greedy eyes steal,
Something that does not seem quite real.
Tragically wishing upon star stricken moons,
For doves are touching you this noon.
A simple love so touching, gracious, benign,
Cannot, will not, give up by cruel time.
Feast your eyes upon something so great;
The love of loves, the love of fate.

Held in your arms, a thought is displayed,
Is this truth, forever delayed?
Gracious touch simple by shouting sound,
Everywhere around you this love is found.
High above the sky is a majestic creation,
Where fate of love makes a splendid sensation.
Falling grandiosely to gentle song,
You must caresses it simply and strong.
Just feast your eyes upon something so great;
The love of loves, the love of fate.

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  • 16 years ago

    by XxxBeenThereRockedThatxxX

    I love this one....It made me smile for some reason and I REALLY needed to smile!! Thx...

  • 17 years ago

    by amber

    You have alot of talent in your writing and alot of knowledge for our age. The only thing that i can see that is a little off in most of your poems that i've read is the flow...the words are perfect, they fit and it sounds wonderful but it's like a song, it doesn't sound right when it's missing some beats, this would be better if you added a few more syllables or smaller words to make the rhyme scheme fit. i know i've given some critisizm (or however you spell that) to you and you can return the favor...and dont take this nor the other comment to heart
    thanks
    ~*~Amber~*~

  • 17 years ago

    by We Miss You Shannon

    Good emotion

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Realy good work,especially

    Everywhere around you this love is found.
    High above the sky is a magestic creation,
    Where fate of love makes a splendid sensation.

    keep up the good work,see ya later honey;)

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow.....this is such a beautiful poem

    i love it! great job!

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