The W|h|o|r|e

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Oct 31, 2006


I tried something new.. So, tell me what you think.
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Glisten, glisten;
Kiss him, kiss him;
Miss him, miss him;
Listen, listen.
Must, must;
Trust him, trust him;
Lust him, lust him;
Shush, shush.
Hide, hide;
Ride him, ride him;
Blind him, blind him;
Collide, collide.
Master, master;
Pass her, pass her;
Trash her, trash her;
Faster, faster.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I LOVE this!!
    This was amazing work.
    I thought it was very creative and unique in concept and you did a truly amazing job.

    P.S Thanks for the correction on my poem, I didn't even notice that, and I'm happy to give you a kick up the a.ss =D LOL

  • 18 years ago

    by broken reflection

    Very good, it's really original, luv it 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    I love the flow it's amazing! :]
    Ily!
    Love,
    Your Darlingx
    5/5

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