Lust And Love {Palindrome}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Oct 31, 2006


I tried to make the first and last word rhyme, so when it became mirrored, it would still flow... So, I hope it did ok. =S

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-Lust-
Such complications,
Must sensation,
Simpled, explicit love,
Templed, dripping of,
Rent simply hearts,
Sent gently apart.
-Love-
Complications such,
Sensation much,
Love explicit, simpled,
Of dripping, templed,
Hearts simply rent,
Apart gently sent.

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Palindrome Poetry - Also Known as Mirrored Poetry

A palindrome, by definition, is a word, phrase, verse, sentence, or even poem that reads the same
forward or backward. It stems from the Greek word palindromos: palin, meaning again, and
dromos, meaning a running. Combining the two together, the Greek meaning gives us, running
back again...

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  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Great job. I liked the rent simply heart. There were some areas, especially the second half; that seemed a bit confusing in it's wording. Thanks for your comment of my latest peom. I agree that the ending was a bit weak. Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a very original poem in a rare format
    excellently penned

  • 18 years ago

    by broken reflection

    Ooh very good 5/5