by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex Oct 31, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
I tried to make the first and last word rhyme, so when it became mirrored, it would still flow... So, I hope it did ok. =S |
by LadyPearl
Great job. I liked the rent simply heart. There were some areas, especially the second half; that seemed a bit confusing in it's wording. Thanks for your comment of my latest peom. I agree that the ending was a bit weak. Keep it up |
This is a very original poem in a rare format |
Ooh very good 5/5 |