This was rather good. loved the way you ended it. Although it seemed befitting that he left you all of that. A smile is God's way of getting back at the ones who hurt you.

Good flow, and content.

Happiness
Jeannie

Dear, what a beautiful penned once again you potray here, so beautiful emotions, yet heartbraking written, i wish thing doing well with you, take care, bert ~

Great Job, i really liked this poem, I loved this stanza

"Things aren't the same without their pair
So without you I'm just a half
Half of everything I used to be
Like a joke without a laugh"

I thought it was clever!! I love how it ended!! Flow was good!!! 5/5!!

I also really liked that stanza (above). This was very cleverly written, but bitter and moving at the same time. gr8 job! -Trinity