by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere Nov 1, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
[[For all whos child has been kidnapped. Don`t worry I`m there with you!]] |
by LovinMyLife
Oh this is so sad I almost cried. I pray that it's not true is it? If so I am so sorry for your loss. I will pray for you God Bless |
Emotional . |
by Anonymous
Awe, how sad. :[ The flow was okay, but this poem is still pretty good. 4/5 |
by Jessica
Awh, I really hope this is not true sweetie. And if it is I am so sorry. The flow was a little off in this, maybe if you added a rhyme scheme to it it would flow better. The words and emotion you put into it were great though. Nice job 5/5 |
Ok, I liked it, but I have one word of advice. |