Awww! Such an emotianal peace of writing! Its so deep and meaningful. Had a good flow and good words used. A great read! keep it up! xx

Such a beautiful sad penned, writing well with beautiful emotions, may the god keep the child in safe, god bless you dear, thank you for your nice comment, i very appreciated! take care.

This was so sad...I almost cried...I hope things eventually become right again...god bless.

Ok, I liked it, but I have one word of advice.

Try not to repeat yourself that much, example, "From my" and a few others. It's almost like you are making a list, try to start with something different.

Other than that I thought it was good.

Ciao, Joe

Awh, I really hope this is not true sweetie. And if it is I am so sorry. The flow was a little off in this, maybe if you added a rhyme scheme to it it would flow better. The words and emotion you put into it were great though. Nice job 5/5

Awe, how sad. :[ The flow was okay, but this poem is still pretty good. 4/5

Emotional .
The flow was off a bit ,
But it was meaningful and touching .
Nice piecee .
..ღ__MiNDYY

Oh this is so sad I almost cried. I pray that it's not true is it? If so I am so sorry for your loss. I will pray for you God Bless
Burning~Wings