This reminds me so much like my life im crying :( great work! very touching!

Hey, I like this poem. I'm sorry that if my blameing God upset you. I do believe in Him and love Him very much! It's just that at times it's hard to see how He could let things happen you know? I mean He has the power to stop stuff like this but He doesn't. He just lest it happen, lets us get hurt. It just bothers me that's all. But I'm happy you stuck up for Him, that's impresive. Most people would of blown it off. :-) However, I am sorry if I hurt you...don't be mad at me!!!! Well, ttyl buh-bye!

Loved this poem thanks for your comment on "Bleeding on the inside". Which poem was u talking about if I had ideas to add to was it the hostage one if it is no way it is awesome the way it is I thought u had more by your comment at the end.

It's so sad that these things actually happen in this world we live in. While some people seem to live a charmed life, we don't see what goes on beind the scenes.
Excellent flow
5/5
*Gem*