by JLT Nov 1, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
We could sit and talk about rainbows and unicorns. |
by BlueJay
The first line and the title of this piece caught my attention and made me curious as to how you would make this a love poem. I really like the way you did though. The only downside to this piece is the repetition in the middle and end, that just took the charm of the piece away. However the final line did bring some of that back though. |
by Ixora
Beautiful. I like the structure and depth of your poetry. You truly have a talent and it seems as though through your poem you can understand how fairytales can heal reality. Great job! |
by Heidi
Once again, your piece is clearly brilliant. you have always had good writing.. sorry i haven't been around to comment lately. keep it up jess, i've always loved what you write |
by Kylead
Rides unicorn over rainbow yah!! |
by -Usmi-
Rele beautiful poem ... |