Stripped Soul

by Natalie   Nov 1, 2006


Tainted memories which once were obscured,
Away completely through shame built inside,
Catched underneath skin, almost microscopic,
Too small for dense eyes to shed and confide.

Remembrance day rolled 'round past corners,
Exposing truth through shielded eyes of pain,
Falling down on two knees with hands on face,
Swallowing fear down swollen throats in vain.

Dark shadowed reflections followed stripped soul,
Through emotions one thought could never feel,
Revealing an unknown truth straight towards face,
Of needing encouragement reality was never real.

1st November 2006
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  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    This was a really good poem sis, and I'm not quite sure who was reading this, because they obviously cannot judge poetry well. Although short, it contained a lot of things. The flow and rhymes were great. You had a lot of detailed imagery, and your vocabulary was nicely spread. Awesome job SMAWCE sis!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    I really like this. It seems to have so much meaning behind it, & i like the way you told the story, with so much emotion. You sure do have a way with words hun. Keep it up. =]

    Tammie xo

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    A touching piece very well structured xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    It fe;t more narrative as if it were telling the reader instead of showing the redaer unlike your other poem but this one too had a very nice beat to it and a certain quality that made it sad but not begging ot be sad.

  • 18 years ago

    by innocentcrybaby

    Nice. really nice. =]

    Innocent Crybaby*

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