Bete Noir

I liked the way that this one rhymed. *5/5*

Alyson

Creepy!, soz just loved your choce of words, but they sent shivers donw my spine!

Well done, my friend
i really liked this one, dark, deep and powerful. words were chosen carefully, rhymed well and flowed okay throughout.
keep writing
xxxx

Oh wow. I loved the imagery in this. It was like I could see exactly what was happening. In a sort of imaginary way. =P The flow was very well thought out. I just read it, and it came into my head. The rhymes were also very original. That's definately a plus in my books. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

['Tis that which speaks unto the heart]
I think it should be "into" not "unto"

Nice poem. I liked how you split it up into two line stanzas, you dont see that very often. The flow was good as were the rhymes. The descriptions also worked well but I think more detail could have been put into them. Nicely done though 5/5