by aDORKable x3 Nov 1, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Do you love me or do you not? |
by *Charisma*
I loved the opening lines...and this line too |
Beautiful poem, I really understand how you feel honestly , anyways great work :D 5/5 |
by Adriana
Well said.. well said.. impressive |
by donna
Hey Hun, nice job on this poem, I'm not too sure about the use of the word finally twice in the last line.. but other than that it was great.. well done :] |
by xxmichaelxx
Wow! lol. great job on this. i unreserved mine cuz i have no inspiration yet to write about. |