Do You Love Me Or Not

by aDORKable x3   Nov 1, 2006


Do you love me or do you not?
You told me once, but I forgot.
You left me twice, but then came back.
Is out love still right on track?

You told me you loved me, but then you left.
You came back, was it something you regret?
Things were better at first, but the pain came often.
You were still my love, but the edges unsoftened.

Do you love me or do you not?
You told me once, but I forgot.
You told me you cared but then you cheated.
Your words are spiked with lies decieted.

You could fill my head with softspoken lies
You would never know it when you look in your eyes
But now I'm just so sick of you
Finally, you and I are really THROUGH

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  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I loved the opening lines...and this line too
    Your words are spiked with lies decieted.
    a very powerful line. good job!
    Charisma*

  • Beautiful poem, I really understand how you feel honestly , anyways great work :D 5/5

    -Mia-

  • 18 years ago

    by Adriana

    Well said.. well said.. impressive

  • 18 years ago

    by donna

    Hey Hun, nice job on this poem, I'm not too sure about the use of the word finally twice in the last line.. but other than that it was great.. well done :]

  • 18 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Wow! lol. great job on this. i unreserved mine cuz i have no inspiration yet to write about.