Wow, this was a very strong and emotional poem and the thing that is even harder to realize sometimes is that these things do happen in real life and it is a tragic thing. Great writing this one hun! Loved it! 5/5 Keep it up!

Stephanie

Ooo. This one had loads of emotion in it. Maybe just underneath a plot again. Again, the rhymes were cliche and I also think this one should go into the sad or dark poems. That's just how I would classify it. =) 5/5 xxoo

Samantha