Awww how cute

Hey, Hebe, this is a lovely poem in collaboration with your friend, Dion. My favored passage in this composition is as follows:

"i saw it in your eyes
i couldn't look away,
because it felt so nice"

In plain words, you've illustrated this certain feeling, which induces warmth and delightfulness, rather sweetly. It fairly thrilled me =]. Keep on writing what you feel and like. All the best and take care.

Debbie

I realli like this poem.. great job. thanks for commentin on mine as well =]

Welldon Hebe....:) It's good...:)

You ended your poem nicely.
Good flow too..
Beautiful poem.. :)

Writing pleasure from you and the reading joy is from my end... be my creme guest cos I like your style of writing...

Nazeer

Love it! It is beautiful!!! Really it is beautiful...

Nazeer