Comments : Forbidden Love

  • 16 years ago

    by Nelle

    Its nothing bad i asure, its my way of saying im falling for you
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    I think you're missing the you after assure.

    You say love just happens well io agree
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    There is an o on the end of your I

    Sorry, i'm not trying to be too judgmental with all of your poems, i just want you to know what is a typo so you can fix it. I liked this one, it was really cute. The flow wasn't really a flow in the beginning but then it started to work quite well. Good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    I liked ur poem a lottttt..It is really touchable..keep it up:)..5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    I think this was the best our of the ones I have read. The flow was good, the emotions well portrayed...
    Truly A good Write.
    This piece of love was touched with confusion, and it made the piece so much better..

    Excellent job,
    5/5--Elly,