You are gone

by Fredy   Nov 1, 2006


Seems like yesterday you were here telling me stories of your past.
making jokes about my music and my way of dressing.

but now your not here anymore and the house looks so empty and sad just as my heart, no more laughter, jokes, or old stories.

it happened so fast nobody expected it now you are gone...
NO! wait you are here i can feel you in my sorrow you are here in my tears, in the air. i know you are here with me watching over me.
i ask myself where is he? and i can almost hear your voice saying I'm right here with you. and it is true you ARE here in my poem and in my heart for ever and ever until we see each other again.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This was so beautifully written. I know your grandpa would be proud. This poem held so many emotions and you expressed them all so clearly. Very nice work. Shanik

  • 18 years ago

    by Extinct Angel

    Very good I'm the manager n took you up on what you said. i like how you use stanza's but frown upon the blocky writing try to shape it up ok. if you need help either pm or write something on the discussion board ok

    try to get to at least one of my poems

    Mike † Bleeding Demons †

  • 18 years ago

    by Steph

    5/5 Fedy this is briliant keep on writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Fredy

    This poem is for you gradpa i n=know you are watching this and i hope i can make you proud

    FREDY

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