This poem is for you gradpa i n=know you are watching this and i hope i can make you proud

FREDY

5/5 Fedy this is briliant keep on writing!

Very good I'm the manager n took you up on what you said. i like how you use stanza's but frown upon the blocky writing try to shape it up ok. if you need help either pm or write something on the discussion board ok

try to get to at least one of my poems

Mike † Bleeding Demons †

This was so beautifully written. I know your grandpa would be proud. This poem held so many emotions and you expressed them all so clearly. Very nice work. Shanik