Mind of caos

by Miakoda   Nov 1, 2006


My heart is punding in my chest I cannot think I can barley hear my words. I feel faint. Will he say yes will he say no? So emotional so.....I don't know im lost for words ....wordless in a mind of caos

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  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    Short and different. But to the point. Which is what makes it so good! =P I loved this just beacause I've felt this way on a few occassions. Tehe. =]

    Only thing..."caos" should be "chaos".

    Keep it up!!

    -Liz

  • 18 years ago

    by Poison Ivy

    Very short poem but i felt the emotion described.wow this is how im going to feel when i tell that special someone that i like them.Excellent job on this poem i rated it a 5:)