Very short poem but i felt the emotion described.wow this is how im going to feel when i tell that special someone that i like them.Excellent job on this poem i rated it a 5:)

Short and different. But to the point. Which is what makes it so good! =P I loved this just beacause I've felt this way on a few occassions. Tehe. =]

Only thing..."caos" should be "chaos".

Keep it up!!

-Liz