by Bethan Nov 1, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
love is
You ask what you can do |
What a beautifully written poem!!! |
by *Charisma*
I LOVED the last two stanzas. Beautiful job! Jpoet* |
This poem better not be about you and I. Anyway, good poem. The one thing though which I thought, if changed is the third line of most of the stanzas. they were just too short in my opinion. |