This poem better not be about you and I. Anyway, good poem. The one thing though which I thought, if changed is the third line of most of the stanzas. they were just too short in my opinion.

Brad

P.S. Don't forget, I still love you

I LOVED the last two stanzas. Beautiful job! Jpoet*

What a beautifully written poem!!!
i love ur work and ur now on my faves list.
the last 2 stanzas just amazing!!!
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not much yet cuz im new to this site!!!
kat-x-