Thanks for the comment. i like those! lol. jeez... ur poems are like intense. i write pretty much for the same reason as you. its just i dont know how else to deal with things. like i used to cut... but eventually i realized that wasnt doing anything and i just realized a lot of things. i dont have a bad life i just need some way to express how i feel with no rules or limitations and nobody to cut me off and say i dont wanna hear it. ur... 14??? is that what ur profile said??? well im 13 but close enough. im almost 14. i dont think i did the whole rhyming thing right lol. i was just trying to let some anger out. i had a good poem written... like really good but... it got deleted somehow and i never wrote it down... i was pissed lol. i dont have aim but i have msn... u should get that... hit me back!
-kels

I really like this. The emotions that you portrayed in this could be felt throughout the poem. The rhyming seemed a little forced at times, but it was still very good. And the descriptions that you had in this was amazing. 5/5 Keep it up!

Wow....this is amazing, tripp!! so much feeling! you really are an awesome writer! keep up the good work!
~maggie
xoxo

Amazing, A very beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Keep writing.
I don't care if my comment isnt upto your standards I just liked the poem. And felt like commenting.

Happy writing
Hannah-