by Cyma Khan
A very beautiful poem!!!! |
Oh. Excellent poem Joe. |
Short yet so effective to the heart, wonderful poem, great job 5/5 |
by mommyof2
I liked it it was really good! |
by Anonymous
That was okay. Your idea is good, but there's something about it I don't like... 4.5/5. But since there are no decimals in the voting system, it leans towards a 4. |
by Goran Rahim
Oh god, i really can relate to this poem, very great job done..5/5 |
Oooh, I like it! |
by Katie Bug :)
Wow, joe, that was great! :) So much said in so few words. You're a phenominal writer. :) |
by Jessica
Was this some type of form? Because you repeated some of the lines a few times. This was quite effective but some of them sounded a little off.. The imagery was better in this one. Keep up the good work. 5/5 |
by Darien
Nicely done my friend. This sounds like a nice nursery rhyme, sort of like, when kids are playing with their friends, and their mom says it's time to go, but you're not quite done playing. Well, that's what this poem reminded me off. Good job! |
by Deana
I think theres a meaning here that is hidden but speaks out," though its hard to take" We sometimes get lost in the complexities of life but we "walk on" great poem 5/5 to me |