Comments : Journey's End

  • 18 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    A very beautiful poem!!!!

    God bless u

  • 18 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Oh. Excellent poem Joe.
    :] Gave a five.

    Take care,
    N-G-C-S.

  • 18 years ago

    by BlessedByAnAngel

    Short yet so effective to the heart, wonderful poem, great job 5/5

    ~[AnotherDream]~

  • 18 years ago

    by mommyof2

    I liked it it was really good!

  • 18 years ago

    by Anonymous

    That was okay. Your idea is good, but there's something about it I don't like... 4.5/5. But since there are no decimals in the voting system, it leans towards a 4.

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Oh god, i really can relate to this poem, very great job done..5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Oooh, I like it!

    it has a very serene feel to it.. much like a walk in the woods might.

    "sole" should be "soul"

    great work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie Bug :)

    Wow, joe, that was great! :) So much said in so few words. You're a phenominal writer. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Was this some type of form? Because you repeated some of the lines a few times. This was quite effective but some of them sounded a little off.. The imagery was better in this one. Keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Nicely done my friend. This sounds like a nice nursery rhyme, sort of like, when kids are playing with their friends, and their mom says it's time to go, but you're not quite done playing. Well, that's what this poem reminded me off. Good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Deana

    I think theres a meaning here that is hidden but speaks out," though its hard to take" We sometimes get lost in the complexities of life but we "walk on" great poem 5/5 to me