I wish I would've known

by Italian Stallion   Nov 1, 2006


In the dark of night
I sit alone
Wondering why it had to be this way
I wish I would've known

Known the way you felt
Before you left me that night
The way you looked at me
And what went through your mind

I only wish
That you would've stayed
Let me explain
And let me go on loving you

The way I've always done
I just don't understand
Why you got up and left
Did I do something wrong?

Or was there someone else?
I may never know
Why you left that day,
But I do know one thing,

I'll always love you
Day in and day out
Until the day I die
And that is no lie

© Copyright 2006 By: Italian Stallion

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  • 18 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I think this is my favourite poem that I've read of yours. I really love the emotions which you let out in writing this.

    Love job. 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This poema was very nice...
    it was soo sad... and filled with questions... the emotion in it was strong... and the words you used were amazing as well...
    keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    It was good... but the flow was off in a few places. one of my pet peeves is that ppl have like ten different rhyme schemes and stanza sizes in their poems... stay consistent, don't switch every stanza... alternating like three five line stanzas and 1 three line stanza etc etc, that's ok... but just randomly making different lengths and rhyme schemes, it drives me nuts! pretty good though, just revise some of it.

  • 18 years ago

    by TeAr dROp

    Pretty good keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    It was a bit better than some of the other love poems but it did lack taht something that made it stand out. THe imagery was not all there yet some of your poems are beautiful and full of it. It didn't have the emotion taht your life poems do have.But it stillw as a good poem.

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