by ŘÅÇĦ♥ Nov 1, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
goodbye
I'm too scared to get closer to you |
Good work i like your poems |
by Melpomene
Great job with this piece. I liked how you used your own structure it was unique and different. The flow was perfect not once did it stumble and your words simple but effective. Really capturing. The meaning behind this was nicely done and I think so many people can relate to this. Well done a 5/5~mel |
Yea i like this poem too. i love someone but he is moving and i dont know how i will be able to take it. good job |
by Tiffani
Thats a hard feeling to endure. im sorry hun but it will get better i promise. |
by aimee
I really like this poem. |