I love it.
It is EXCELLENT!
Because it is true...unfortunately.
I am going to miss her also.
This poem expresses how we both feel.
And remember, she'll come back for visits. And...you still have me :). I know It's not the same, but I still love you.

Wow! This poem is so deep and there is so much emotion in it! I think that without a rhyme scheme, it expresses the emotion better. I really love this poem. There are a few things you need to fix though--- In the first line it should be: TOO scared - in the second line it should be: and THEN - Also i think you should change the third line to: I just want it to be as PAINLESS as POSSIBLE. - In line 10 I would change it to: That you'll stay - Finally, I think the first letter in EVERY line should be capitalized. Other than those small errors and suggestions, It was incredible!

xxEvilAngelxx

I really like ur poem i feel the same way about someone to

This poem is amazing, it really explains a lot.
good job.

Yeh my poem is kinda confusing ey. u kinda have to no wots behind it. ohh thanx for tellin me about the stuff ups. i'll edit it, i h8 it when it does that, lol

I really like this poem.
xxxxxx.

Thats a hard feeling to endure. im sorry hun but it will get better i promise.
i loved reading ur poem, i like how u put "ill fall apart" at the end

unique write i liked it

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Yea i like this poem too. i love someone but he is moving and i dont know how i will be able to take it. good job

Great job with this piece. I liked how you used your own structure it was unique and different. The flow was perfect not once did it stumble and your words simple but effective. Really capturing. The meaning behind this was nicely done and I think so many people can relate to this. Well done a 5/5~mel

Good work i like your poems