K, if u ever try and kill yourself, you'd betterhope it worls cos if it dn't and u survive - I'd kill you! lol
NEway now dats out the way. I didn't like the theme cos I'm biased but I loved the poem- and I notice the gr8 Kurt Cobain, got a mention!!
I tried to pick a favourite stanza but I couldn't cos I think the whole poems brilliant, Perfect structure, rhythm, rhyme -flawless.
All my Love,
Beth xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

(BDW, waa if what you want are lies cos u thought my one was bout us and did it have a connection 2 dat or wos it jus written from that because it inspired you to write the other side of the story??)

BTW a certain yellow mouse attached to a pieve of string was in my bed today courtesy of a cat named Pewter, She had brought it up from the computer chair where it was when i came in, not sure if its for you or me but if it was for you, remember to thank her next time you see her. lol

Sad. makes me wanna cry.

i hope things pick up for you.

keep writin
~Em

Love it love it love it...this is the way i feel nine times out of ten...and i could never put it in words but you did...and i thhink it is great...i have read every poem you have wrote and i think you are a great writer...so keep it up.and great job...

Sometimes i feel like this.
how much truth does this poem have?
(please dont commit suicide!!!)
i love this poem though!!! very powerful.
kat-x-