I like this...But i thing u could give more :D...And u have a tiny mistake

Where will I do now? In my tears I choke.

It's in fact Where will I go now?
That's all.Re.Good luck. *Andra*

Very good poem!

It was kool i liked reading it..i thought towards the end it got a little weak but other wise it good...rachy

A very good poem. Very sad. I've never read one about this, so to me at least, it was original. Good job!
Charisma*

That is pretty darn good...

Well it wasnt your best, but i still think you did alright on it. there were some parts where the rhymes seemed kind of.. i dont know, like you could have used some more..mature words for the situation (? i dont know:P) you were talking about. but i do like how you ended it. but the ending line wasnt flowing with the 2nd to last line...other than that, good write

U r gifted.