W A R N I N G S

by ALLEN CEM   Nov 1, 2006


BANGING.... ON THIS DOOR WHICH WONT OPEN WHEN I KNOCK

TICKING.... THE LAST SECONDS I HAVE LEFT ON THIS CLOCK

BURNING.... MY HEART LIKE I'M IN A FLAME

YELLING..... AT MYSELF WITH NO ONE TO BLAME

VOMITING.....MY ORGANS OUT FILLED WITH RAGE

TURNING...... TO THE LAST CHAPTER COMING NEAR THE LAST PAGE

MELTING..... MY LIFE LIKE A BLOCK OF ICE

BLEEDING...... MY WRISTS SPLIT OPEN WITH THIS KNIFE

CRYING.....FROM EVERYTHING THAT I HAVE DONE WRONG

SINGING...... THE WORDS TO MY FAVORITE SAD SONG

WILLING..... TO DO ANYTHING FOR JUST ONE MORE CHANCE

PRAYING..... TO SEE YOU FOR JUST ONE QUICK GLANCE

GASPING..... FOR AIR , AS I TAKE MY LAST BREATH

DYING..... THE LAST WORD I WRITE BEFORE MY DEATH

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I really liked this, the theme was original in its concept, which is always nice.

    I liked the imagery, wording and flow, and I thought the rhyme scheme was good.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    A little bit different but you did an amazing job!!!
    Thanks for the comment as well.

  • 18 years ago

    by Christie

    Wow. just wow. the last line actually made my heart stop and do a double take.

    excellent, powerful poetry right there. 5/5

    thankyou for the wonderful comments u left for me. =D
    keep writing, u have talent.
    xxx