Questions

by Megan   Nov 1, 2006


Take a look at me
and what can you say?
Can you say that I'm hurt?
Can you say I'm OK?

Can you tell me why i hide
behind shadows and scars?
Can you tell me why I'm locked,
behind clad iron bars?

Can you see that the sadness
is burdening my soul?
Can you see that the pain
has taken more than its toll?

Can you touch my skin
and look into my eyes?
Can you brush your hand across my lips
and shatter my lies?

Can you taste the bitter poison
that comes from my death kiss?
Breathing in the scent
of emotions you cant miss.

Can you look at me,
and dig deep into your mind?
Can you stay with me,
or will you leave me behind?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jen

    I loved this poem, the subjectt of it was great too.
    It flowed really well too and i like poems that continuously flow so yeh keep it up =]=]

    ~*~Jen~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by kelS;

    This poem was good!. it kinda reminds me of how i right my poems but better! so it kinda cool in that wayy! good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this...it was so sweet yet sad and filled with emotion.
    I thought the flow was off in a little places, but apart from that it was very good!

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Time passes, and lives have to change, To distinguish fantasy from reality...... so heartfelt poem, within well express emotions, and though sad but well penned, within the question, The image you potray here, could it really be...? anyway, keep writing, and hope you have a great day, best wishes. bert.~

  • 18 years ago

    by ForeverYoung

    Wow, great work! i love the way you asked questions all the way through!
    Your rhyming was great and didnt seem forced at all!

    Im really surprised this is your first poem, its really great!
    keep up the great work!

    5/5

    ~Murder.

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