Thats so sad...that guy shudnt b crying tho considering he killed her. I wish there was something we cud do to help ppl lyk that. I do ask tho and dont take it personally...what modivated u 2 rite it? (oh and 5/5, well done)

Wow- This is a good one. I realllllyy like the flow it just like all goes together perfectly.♥

Rachel