Aww, this poem made me smile. At times I feel this way about my dad too (not at others... but we won't get into that) Great write! Keep up the good work!

xxEvilAngelxx

I agree with Gar. Too many "you" 's. It made the poem seem cliche and uninteresting. The flow was way off again, and could be improved with the changing of the words. Instead of the word 'you', you could replace some with 'daddy' or just change the stanzas all together. If you put more emotion of how you feel towards your dad, it would add a lot to the poem. =) Please don't take any of this personal. I just thought that some people should get some honest opinions about their work =P 4/5 xoxo

Samantha

Aww this is really sweet! i dont have that great of a relationship with my dad, but this poem conveys so much emotion and love....
i noticed it was in the misc. section....i would probably put it in the family section(?)

cyas!
Emmm

Wow, another amazing poem, such a great talent............5/5