by Kristina Nov 2, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Today I found out, |
by Goran Rahim
I luv ur word choices in this one.... |
Hmmm. I like the emotion in this, but there could be more. I see that you're angry, and sad, but...could you dig a little deeper into the emotion? Perhaps it would make the poem longer, and it would improve on the flow. |