I Think I Can Move On

by Kristina   Nov 2, 2006


Today I found out,
What you've been doing,
Cheating on all your girlfriends,
Thinking they wouldn't find out.

When my friend told me this,
It actually made me stop liking you,
I think I've finally gotten over you,
Cause you would have done the same to me,
If we were still together.

So I guess I should be happy,
That I'm not with you,
Cause if you were,
And you did this to me,
Then it would have hurt me even more.

Maybe now I can move on,
And stop loving you,
Find someone new,
But just to let you know,
I'll never stop thinking of you.

Copyright © April 23, 2006 - Kristina M

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  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    I luv ur word choices in this one....

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Hmmm. I like the emotion in this, but there could be more. I see that you're angry, and sad, but...could you dig a little deeper into the emotion? Perhaps it would make the poem longer, and it would improve on the flow.

    I know what it's like to be cheated on, and it's not very comfortable. But there's a lot more emotion in your thoughts that you couldn't/didn't get out onto the page (or screen in this case).
    This kinda seems like a venting poem to me. Which it probably is lol. I've had a few of those before, so I won't vote too hard. Don't take any of this personal. Just some suggestions for next time. =) 4/5 xxoo

    Samantha