Hmmm. I like the emotion in this, but there could be more. I see that you're angry, and sad, but...could you dig a little deeper into the emotion? Perhaps it would make the poem longer, and it would improve on the flow.

I know what it's like to be cheated on, and it's not very comfortable. But there's a lot more emotion in your thoughts that you couldn't/didn't get out onto the page (or screen in this case).
This kinda seems like a venting poem to me. Which it probably is lol. I've had a few of those before, so I won't vote too hard. Don't take any of this personal. Just some suggestions for next time. =) 4/5 xxoo

Samantha

I luv ur word choices in this one....