Illusion?

by BlessedByAnAngel   Nov 2, 2006


In an illusion of love
Had dreamt it was real
Whispers of your name
Taunting me i feel

Dripping wet
Alone in the pouring rain
Abandonned one more time
Just to feel more pain

Darkness closing in
Light is fading away
Will someone rescue me?
Or unhappy will i stay?

Revive me from my death
Repair my broken heart
Tell me you love me
Make it like the start

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  • 18 years ago

    by tiffany

    I liked the way u wrote this peom. by tha way.. ur quotes are amazing! good job :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    "Revive me from my death
    Repair my broken heart"

    Those two lines were two of the most powerful lines in this poem.
    It was so poignant and sad.
    Well done hun! It was a brilliant poem
    5/5 as always
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by Freddie

    Thats so sad....if u eva need to talk im here, ive had enough life experience for someone to think i was 50. anyway, great poem, keep writing.
    XOXO Freddie.

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