Maybe if

by Georgia   Nov 2, 2006


Maybe if i just lose a fue more kilos
maybe if i cut some more
maybe if i was prettier
maybe if i mess up
maybe if i cry a little more
maybe if i ignore it
maybe if i keep it in
maybe if i let it in

maybe then it will be OK

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i don't no but it looks like it sucks so sorry

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  • 18 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Dont be sorry,
    "I know that you are beautifull
    I know you just dont see
    I know that your amazing
    Georgia your as beautifull as can be!"
    Thats what I think :) i loved your poem dont ever stop writing :))

  • 18 years ago

    by David

    So nice and short yet very powerful.

    i liked it and others have so it does not suck. its good. very good.

    David

  • 18 years ago

    by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-

    Hey great poem but i picked up a few errors.

    In the 1st lin fue should be few.
    Also, mabye capitalise all your 'i's, and the first letter in every line.

    i really like the idea of the mabye if, is a really great idea, i really enjoyed this poem, keep it up,
    Love Mel

  • 18 years ago

    by Freddie

    It doesn't suck...dont say dat! I liked it. my advice tho is to put a few more things about trying to change in there b4 u move on 2 the crying part. 5/5 from me.
    XOXO Freddie.

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