It doesn't suck...dont say dat! I liked it. my advice tho is to put a few more things about trying to change in there b4 u move on 2 the crying part. 5/5 from me.
XOXO Freddie.

Hey great poem but i picked up a few errors.

In the 1st lin fue should be few.
Also, mabye capitalise all your 'i's, and the first letter in every line.

i really like the idea of the mabye if, is a really great idea, i really enjoyed this poem, keep it up,
Love Mel

So nice and short yet very powerful.

i liked it and others have so it does not suck. its good. very good.

David

Dont be sorry,
"I know that you are beautifull
I know you just dont see
I know that your amazing
Georgia your as beautifull as can be!"
Thats what I think :) i loved your poem dont ever stop writing :))