The second last vers is another define of lov. u can't really question it 'cause it's a personal memory. through ur poems i've notice u give positive affect to people than u relize. gr8 job:)

Ok that does it... ur officially now one of my few favorites!! continue the good stuff, i like ur rimes, n moreover ur words!! like some in there have a great feel, a strong meaning or smooth transition or statement, don't really know what it is, but it's all good!

"I did send you a teddy
To remind you of our past
He'll keep you warm and safe
Thru those cold, dead nights"

Such a beautiful and sweet opening
As i read more of your poetry, i can see what heartache you've suffered.
And you don't deserve it. I truly hope you find somone who's worthy of you
5/5 as always hun
*Gem*
xxxx

Oh this has a lot of feeling in it. great! i felt that i could put myself in this poem.

perfect. excellent. i gave you a 5.

David