Good. =')

Lov is sad. i can relate to this. the first vers touched me. keep writing:)

Really liked it 5/5... thanks 4 the comments means alot 2 me...

At the end of this poem i was just left looking at the screen and was like wow! Its just great totally took my breath away. Its sad but in a kinda different way. Its sad to you cause it a personal pain. Okay im not explainin myself very well here so i will leave it at that i think it is a powerful and great poem.

Kelly
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Wow this actually has a sad feel to it but has so much emotion and was well written i loved it weldone =]=]=]

~*~Jen~*~

I like these rimes:

Lady luck was with us
Why'd she leave our side?!

I guess you couldn't see
The day you walked away
You left a hole in me

This is soo good! Why are your poems so good :) Huh?! :D
Touching words.
5/5
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Thanks for my comment btw!

Wow. I wish i had more to say but i can't find the words to sum up my feelings on this one.
It's just so sad and upsetting.
I hope you feel better, i really do.
*Gem*
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Now this one made my eyes actually water, its just cause I feel really down and poems like this remind me more and more of my ex. Another great poem.