2 by 2.

by Kevin   Nov 2, 2006


Strange my lass oh how gentle,
for loud and clumsy could not escape me.
Yet, softly step the ways inside
to overtake our thin desires,
and by ourself, determination,
will it so we let it hide us.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    This one really spoke to me, i loved it

  • 17 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    I've read this a few times but didn't exactly grasp it. This time I think i understood the msaage. Mind blowing how you say so much, in so few words.. those first two lines and the last two lines. pure poetry..

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Just to let you know.. I didn't rate a one.

    But anyway. This was.. interesting. I'm not so sure I got the full effect of the poem. So.. my rating is undecided.

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