Wow, I loved this. The wording was great, and the flow was amazing. Not a lot of rhyming going on, but you did a great Job without it. Good Job!

Ciao, Joe

Wow!
I loved this, it was so well thought out and written.
The flow and imagery was perfect, the wording was excellent and I can totally relate to this.
5/5
P.S The other two poems you asked me to do I have already done so I'm going to go choose another two.

Oh yeah, I can positively (sp? lol) relate to this one. I have lost many good friends in my life, just due to backstabbing and it hurts but I learned how to move on with life and try to realize who my real friends are in life. 5/5 Great write here! Loved it! Keep writing hun, you're an amazing writer and I look forward to reading more of your work in the near future. Also thx for the comment, it meant a whole lot to me.

Stephanie

Great job very good emotion in here 5/5 keep it up

I don't like this poem as much as the first one of yours i read... but it isn't bad. The emotion is good but it could be better. I didn't feel it. The imagery was pretty good and i liked how it was without the rhyme scheme--- Great job!

xxEvilAngelxx

I read this poem when you first posted it, but for some reason it logged me out. This time it worked..

"Slowly unraveling a shoes sturdy laces.."
[shoe's]

So I had to read it again, because I didn't remember what it was about, now that I did, I feel bad. It's a really good poem. The descriptive words and the deep meaning. Different from a dedication poem, but really good.

This poem of you reminded me something that i went through recently, very nicely written. 5/5

You have the best imagery i've ever read im in love with the style of your poems! i remember reading the weakened butterfly and falling in love with it and then i recognized your writing so i added you to my favorites keep up the good work im sure you will!!! *kayla*

That has got to be one of the worst feelings to ever feel...what I loved most about this poem is it was so relateable to every single human being, we have all, or will all experience these emotions you have described..wonderful wording and descriptions...I loved it!
Krissey

Not bad, try not to be so forceful with the lines.

Omg great use of words in this poem. very well written. very touching. xx

Aww. It's so hard to lose a friend that's been good to you for so long. I know my friends and I are going through some 'issues', but the remainder of my friends are working together to help each other through each day. I just hope you can do the same. =)

This poem was...wow. I dunno. I felt as if it was the story of my life. I don't know why it's rated so low, but I gave it a 5/5. Maybe some aren't touched in ways that others are. I thought this poem had beautiful imagery, and a lot of people could probably relate very closely. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Very strong poem. Great use of words. You described what you feel so well you can completely imagine what's going on. Well done! 5/5
Keep writing.

Taylor♥

I could really feel the anger and frustration in this poem. You did a good job with that! Jpoet*