A good poem love, not your best, but much better than some people ever do. My favorite stanza was by far the closing one. A nice, strong, slightly unconcluded ending. Good work.

Brad

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Wonderful poem..i loved it.especially the part where you say you'd love to give up hope but that person hasnt given you a reason why.damn its so frustrating not knowing if the other person feels the same but until then we will continue to wait because without them life is not worth living.i rate this a 5!

I loved this part"So I'll tap my foot to the rhythm
But keep it slow and steady
Hopefully you'll ask me to dance
One day whenever you're ready"
that last stanza was amazing and stood out alot loved it great poem 5/5 keep it up

"So I'll tap my foot to the rhythm
But keep it slow and steady
Hopefully you'll ask me to dance
One day whenever you're ready"

This was my favorite stanza, this isnt my favorite poem i have ever read but it is still good!!! The flow and rhyme were great and the ending was good! 5/5!!! Great Job!!