I think it should be put in sadness.. WOW that was so sad and actually brought tears to my eyes.. That doesn't happen too often, but just the truth in it, the way bullying has a huge impact on peoples lives and sadly the bully's don't realise 'til it's too late..

Excellent job on this poem, yes it was long but not once did I get bored.. Well done 5/5 xx

5/5.
You made me cry. And it is kinda hard to make me cry. I feel so much like this when I was in Middle school. Now I am out of hell, finally! I loved it! Keep up the GREAT WORK! 1000000/5

Awh, my gosh hun. That was soo sad! I agree completely with you that bullying is so wrong. The flow in this was good and the repitition worked well. The rhyme scheme really helped to pull it all together and the emotion you put in was breathtaking. I think this should go in the sadness section. Very nicely done 5/5

Wow, blew me away. This was a very heartbreaking piece of poetry to read. I am with you on the bullying thing, I think it's terribly wrong and whoever does it is just plain old pathetic. This poem was a good thing to write about because it does go on in real life and there are people who go through bullying like this. For some reason this poem reminds me of the Degrassi episode where Rick starts a school shooting. Well, anyway if you don't watch Degrassi you have no clue in the world what I am talking about. So, great job with this one hun, I enjoyed reading this piece of real-world occurences

Wow, this was an excellent poem, Ver well written. I do have one thing to say, in the begining of the poem you repeated yourself alot, was it meant to be like that? Because it got kind of annoying, although Repeating is usually a good thing, I feel you repeated yourself too much, try and start with something different. Other than that this was just an amzing poem.

Ciao, Joe

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>
>
> Dear Gianna,
> That first e-mill was send by mistake.
>
> You confuse me what do u me by all of that and
> especially by. {are you mad at me because I hang up
> on
> you because I just am flustered about us being
> friends
> ok. if I tell u now you won't like this?} I don’t
> call every min. by the way I call every day because
> I
> care about you that’s way. I call a lot but if u
> want
> me to call not as mach just tell me I won’t get
> upset.
> I just wanted to talk over the weekend I had no won
> to hag out with Matt and Chris went home and I just
> wanted to talk to you I gust. What do you mean by
> this? {Can't Chris solve all your problems or he’s
> to
> good for you?}.
>
>
>
> PS
> Yes weare still friend, are we? I know you have a
responsibility with school I do
> to!
> I respect that! Pleas write back.
>
> You’re Friend
>
> Nick Mazzocco
>

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Omgosh this poem is sooooo sad, i rekon it shud be in the sad poems one, :( awww its so sad

Wow! This poem sent shiver running down my spine. Its really sad. But the subject of the poem, the way its written, all of it was just.... wow. I am literally lost for words. Its such a great poem! Really enjoyed reading it! Keep it up! xx

Wow.
this is SO goodd! i don`t even know what to say! its so sad.. you should put it in sadness. GREAT WORK!

Wow... This is so sad... It made me tear up a little. Great poem, I really liked it.

Wow what a great poem it should be in sad and wow this is such a good example of an outcome of bullying! very well writtien i give you 5/5 = )

keep up the good work!!

Aww... that is a really sad poem and you did an amazing job on it. The flow and rhtyhm was very good and held up well. The note to the boys mom was written so very well and almost made me cry. Maybe this will help people better understand how bullying really gets to people and keep them from being so mean to other people. You did an absolute wonderful job on this. And I loved it! 5/5

Well, let me just say. This was a very long poem, and at times it did lose a poetic feeling. I really think you should consider putting this into a series. From the things that were done, the note left behind and finally the way that the person felt after.

It was a great concept and the story is very powerful, but people would get discouraged from reading it, if it's too long. Good stuff though.

Geez, that kinda poem could really change a person.. well atleast I think so.
It showed alotta emotion... Beautiful. 5/5

-Her.

Omg this is amazing

This poem is COOOOL! i mean just cool. i think you should put it in deppression

This poem is COOOOL! i mean just cool. i think you should put it in deppression

Omg this made me cry.. i hope to god this didnt really happen to anyone you knew?

Oh wow, what am amazing poem! so saddening to read, it sux that so many people have to go through this every day.
other that that, this poem is truley amazing, you have alot of tallent, so keep writing!
The flow was great and your rhyming was good, but a little cliche.
5.5
~Murder

WOW! What an amazing poem! So sad, but it really shows how hurt a person can be from bullying. Good job and good message!
Charisma*