I loved the poem and i totaly agree about bulling.i love the message that the poem told....great job

Awesome poem. Loved the imagery.

It is a good poem it make me want to cry

Wow this is really moving.. i disagree with bullying as well - and i like the way your put the concequences in a way people can relate and understand.. and those who are being bullied can know that what bullies say isnt actually what they mean.. they get a cheap thrill!! congratulations!! verrryy well done.. Xgab

Wow! There is so much raw emotion! I love it, I think it flowed together really well. I totally agree with you, I find bullying people appalling. Awesome Job!! Keep up the great work! Can't wait to read more. 5/5

take care,
Izzy

+.+ I really liked this poem. I agree with you, bullying is disgusting and I tell my friends there being mean if they do it. Soooooo sad. :( Beautifully written +.+

This is also very good ... but you say you dilike any one who bullies i disagree ... i think u should like them so much it hurts them into understanding what they are doing and why befriend them and help them undo what they did...

i am saying this cause i was that little one in ur poem but im disguise .. i was not little at all i usted to be extremely over weight and every one picked on me i have no friends till high school and the bullying was so bad that in first grade i was wearing a dress and a boy from my grade said i was so ugly i didnt deserve a dress and he hit me with and stick until i was laying on the ground in pain crying ...

WOW that was amazing! my bro was bullied alot when he was lil. he's 20yrs old now and i can still see the pain in his eyes, bullying is not acceptable and as you point out it wreks ppls lives! how bout we start taking ppl for who they are and not what they look like! to my bro i love you always no matter what! and thank you for writing this poem it's truely amazing! you must have a relly big heart=) xchristinax

Once again you have shown so much emotion and i absolutly love this poem i think it is ahmazing and it is evil to bully. i seriously love you writing your great!!!!!!

Wow, that was so good. SOOOO sad, but SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good! Bullying is wrong; I only wish all the bullys out there could read this. So beautiful.

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This is sooo great u should go to every school and read it.. we'd have more people on earth if it wasnt for bullys who kicked there feelings in the dirt