I didn't quite understand this poem...to be honest. Thanks for your comment. I agree OUR DANCE isn't my best, but it was one of my favs lol! Funny how that works.
Jpoet*
P.S. I was confused...did you mean you want me to always vote and comment or that that was what you try to do for mine? LOL

Hmm..not as good as the others that I've read from you..but it was good all the same. 4/5..keep it up

Is this another one of your kinda true poems?? Cos i can see how it would be, seeing as you seem to think you aren't a nice person, which is a load of rubbish btw.
I actually really like this poem, I couldn't pick a favourite stanza because I kinda liked them all except I think the last one wasn't as powerful as the first 3. I think its just the 2nd line that makes it seem that way. I often find that though, cos when your trying to end a poem sometimes its hard and it's doesn'tcome out as well as the beginning.
Love You xxx

I like it!!!
you can see this poem reflected in the eyes of so many people.
- this is one of my fave poems.
kat-x-

Dang i have a poem almost like this but your's is way better lol. I like the whole thing but one thing that got me by surprise i thought when u said there is only one way it will end i thought you were going to kill him lol. Great job
-vino

p.s. I've been busy too lol