Fallen angel

There once was a girl, who cried all day,
Shed hope her pain would go away,
She was hurt so much, she was dead inside,
Shed run to her corner, there shed hide.

Shed cry tears of pain, leaving stains upon the floor,
Slitting her wrist because she cant take much more,
Shed hide her pain behind her eyes,
Shed cover her anger with all those lies.

Scars along her arm, words were carved in
Addicted to self-harm, tearing her beautiful skin,
Ever since he left her, she never was the same,
She cut herself once more time; she could not take the pain,

Her cold blood trickled down her pale skin,
It seemed to her the pain would win,
A bleeding heart and a broken soul,
He tore her apart and left her unwhole stood on the chair,
With the wind in her hair,
Not a single tear in sight,
Ready for her suicide, her death tonight.

Her heart raced, her pupils got small,
She turned around and committed the fall.
Another planned suicide; a beautiful girl is dead,
No longer could she hide, so she took her life instead.

please comment on my poem, i wanna kno wot u think b4 i put some more on, if its worth my while or am i wastin my time? thanx leonie x