Fate

This might sound a little sick, but i'm listing my club playlist, and this actually goes pretty well with the remix of one of the songs, mabey u know it - imagine you and me, and me and you, and all the things we used to be, it goes something like that, but the remix fits perfectly! i now its sad, but its a terrific song!

I liked this, particuarly the imagery.
I found it very moving.
Beautiful.

Just a tip, you used blink three times, and i think you could improve your poem by using a better word like nictitate, or something else. =)
anyways, well written poem, a little forced, but other wise good.
my favorite line was: "The prayers that caress my lips" this line is SO powerful, and i ♥ it so much!!
nice one yo 5;5

Wow.. that last line really blew me away. The whole poem was very descriptive and filled with so much emotion. The flow and rhtyh was very good and it held up very well. I just loved all of it. Great job on this! 5/5

This was a good poem..it was pretty deep and had a strong point in it. I think it was very well written:), nice flow and good poem over all. 5/5