Comments : Dying Inside

  • 20 years ago

    by Danielle

    WOAH, that was an amazing poem! Really, I never would've thought of an ending like that, it's a terrible story, but you wrote it very well, again you set the mood and I'm beginning to enjoy reading your so much! KEep writing ok?!

  • 20 years ago

    by leyana

    i agree with dani its a great endin...hopefully this didnt happen to anyone u noe...i look forward to reading more of your work
    leyana