She Doesn't Care

by Tripp   Nov 2, 2006


The pain he just couldn't take any longer
this time, depression proved to be the stronger
he died with a note in his hand that read
I'll love this girl forever, even when I'm dead

He was crushed like the used end of a cigarette
and he spent his life, filled to the brim with regret
but the memories he couldn't extinguish
and it's hold, the love wouldn't relinquish

He tried to find his solace in a bottle of whine
hoping he'd start to get close to feeling fine
he drowned in his sorrows, and died in despair
he doesn't even think, that she even cares

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  • 18 years ago

    by manic moments

    And what can i say that will make this seem anymore beautiful to someone's eyes?

    "He was crushed like the used end of a cigarette
    and he spent his life, filled to the brim with regret
    but the memories he couldn't extinguish
    and it's hold, the love wouldn't relinquish"

    How sweet the feeling must of been for this poor guy, but then lost. You know where to find me.

    Good work tripp

    Love Niquee